As a reader, I’m seeing too much writing with a barrage of loooooooooooooooooong sentences.
I know I’d never make it as an audiobook voice. (Pant. Pant.) Most of all, I have to backtrack to review the first 10 words of those paragraph-long ramblings.
No, don’t talk like Tarzan.
However, try imagining your sentence structure like a roller coaster. Big climbs. Twists and turns. Variety.
It’s not a beginning-to-end screamfeast on coasters, either. There’s anticipation. Climbing slowly. Higher. Higher.
I’ve seen some writing of late with the sentence structure: long, longer, longest.
Break it up in there, please.